Showing posts with label Week 11. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 11. Show all posts

Friday, November 1, 2019

Week 11 Story: The Urchin in the Ocean


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One day a group of fish was swimming about the ocean looking for a coral reef to stay in for the night. At night, the fish have to sleep in a coral reef because they are so small they have a risk of being an animal’s meal. In one particular reef, there was a sea urchin who lived there and waited for prey. The urchin was very scary and did not go outside of the reef as he was the local whale’s favorite snack. If any animal tried to stay in his reef, he would use one of his spikes to enable him from swimming away then he would eat them for his meal. The group of fish was swimming all day looking a reef to stay in when they all saw one insight. The reef was perfect, it was big enough for all of them to stay, and was dark in color so it would not attract as many animals to it. One brave fish decided he would go scope it out and swam swiftly over to the reef. He started going in towards the reef and disappeared. All of the fish were shocked that he was gone so quick. Another fish, worried for his friend, quickly followed after him. He slowly approached the reef and began to swim inside. The urchin spiked him and the fish was soon consumed by the urchin too. All of the fish began to panic and swim around the reef sad that two of their friends had disappeared. The fish started to think they would have nowhere to stay for the night and would all be eaten alive. A dolphin swam over and saw the fish looking worried and sad. He asked what was wrong and the fish told him that two of their friends had been taken in this reef. The smart dolphin knew it was an evil urchin. He remembered that all urchins had their spikes as weapons so he told the fish he would be back and hurriedly swam away. A few minutes later he came back with a handful of long, sticky seaweed. He told the fish to hold on to one side of it while he grasped the other side of the seaweed. They began to floss the coral reef. The local whale swam by to see what was going on, and at the same time the fish and the dolphin pulled up on the seaweed to see the mean urchin sticking to it able to get out. The local whale saw his favorite snack and immediately swam over to eat it. The fish were pleased and happy they had somewhere to stay for the night. They thanked the dolphin and the whale and settled down in the reef for the night.







Author’s Note: I was inspired by the jakata tale, The Goblin in the Pool and wanted to create my own story. In the Goblin story, the mean goblin stopped the monkeys from drinking the pool water until they figured out a way to trick him. I wanted the same idea behind my story, except with characters from the ocean. I thought using the school of fish would be a unique idea similar to the group of monkeys, and I wanted my hero at the end to be the smart dolphin. The dolphin was ultimately able to figure out how to trick the urchin into attaching to the sticky seaweed and pulling him out of the reef to be eaten. I really enjoyed writing this story, and hope it was interesting to read!




Bibliography:
Author: W.H.D Rouse
Title: The Goblin in the Pool
Link: Story




Wednesday, October 30, 2019

Reading Notes: Jakata Tales, The Goblin in the Pool




In the forest, the animals have to drink out of a pool of water if they get thirsty because it is their only source of water. In one particular forest, there was a pool of water where a goblin lived. The goblin was extra scary and could not rise above the water because he did not have a nose only gills. If any animal tried to take a drink from this pool the goblin would eat them. If the animal stayed on the bank the goblin could not get them because he cannot breathe above water. One time a huge drought had soaked up all of the pools in the forest except the one where the goblin lived because it was in a very shady area of trees and it was also very deep. A large group of monkeys was searching for water when they saw this pool of water. The king of the monkeys noticed that there were footprints going to the water but never coming back up so he stopped the monkeys before they could take a drink. One of the monkeys in this group was so thirsty he could not contain himself and he ran down to take a drink and disappeared. A second monkey ran to the water and tried to take a drink and screamed while he was being sucked underneath the water and he too disappeared. They all were very scared because the two monkeys had been taken and they still had not had anything to drink. A man approached the pool and saw the monkeys looking sad and worried. He asked what was wrong. The monkeys said he would drown if he went in. The man figured out it was a goblin. The man found a reed and stuck one end into the water and drank through it like a straw. At once the rest of the monkeys copied him and were pleased they could drink the water. The goblin died of starvation from no one else taking a drink.

Reader’s Note:
I really enjoyed this story and its twist at the end. I think I could recreate this by using a different setting, maybe the ocean. And use humans as the main characters instead of animals. I thought this story was one of the best I had read because it was a simple plot yet very fun and entertaining to read.

Bibliography:
Author: W.H.D Rouse
Title: The Goblin in the Pool
Link: Story